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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Will you correct my English? (Aug.17)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

On the way to the airport.

M: Can't you go ( any ) faster? I have to check in by 9:30.

F: I'm sorry, but please understand how the traffic is.

M: Only 10 more minutes. I'll never make it.

No. 2

M: Excuse me, but you can't leave your car ( unattended ) here.

F: I know, but I'm just stepping into the terminal to go to the

restroom [ lavatory ]. ( Q. Which is better? )

M: Even so, you ( 'll ) have to park [ leave ] your car in the parking lot.

Thank you. kenta
  

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the no 1 I think is good already. but the 2nd one, I think the right one should be I know, but I just stepped into the terminal and the correct one should be restroom (lavatory is uncommon as it is used only on the plane) the rest are fine

  • the no 1 I think is good already.
  • but the 2nd one, I think the right one should be I know, but I just stepped into the terminal and the correct one should be restroom (lavatory is uncommon as it is used only on the plane) the rest are fine
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the no 1 I think is good already.
but the 2nd one, I think the right one should be I know, but I just stepped into the terminal

and the correct one should be restroom (lavatory is uncommon as it is used only on the plane)

the rest are fine
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I didn't know "lavatory" is used only on the plane.

Thank you!

kenta
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Hi,

No. 1

On the way to the airport.

M: Can't you go ( any ) faster? I have to check in by 9:30.

F: I'm sorry, but please understand how the traffic is. (This seems too formal. I suggest

I'm sorry, look at the traffic.)

M: Only 10 more minutes. I'll never make it.

No. 2

M: Excuse me, but you can't leave your car ( un
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Thank you, Clive. M is a police officer, and in Japan, even a female uses this kind of

expression as an excuse ( of course it's not polite, though ).

You helped me a lot!

kenta

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