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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Will you correct my English? ( Apr. 12 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Let's go out on the veranda and enjoy seeing the scenery.
F: Right. That's why we came to Hawaii.
M: Yeah. Here in Hawaii, flowers bloom and birds sing all the year round.
No. 2
M: This is the worst movie I've ever seen!
F: It couldn't be worse than "Last match" we saw last week.
M: Oh, right. But we shouldn't have come to see this movie anyway.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Let's go out on the veranda and enjoy seeing the scenery.
F: Right. That's why we came to Hawaii.
M: Yeah. Here in Hawaii, flowers bloom and birds sing all the year round.
No. 2
M: This is the worst movie I've ever seen!
F: It couldn't be worse than "Last match" we saw last week.
M: Oh, right. But we shouldn't have come to see this movie anyway.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: Let's go out on the veranda and look at the scenery. F: Right.
- Hi, No.
- 1 M: Let's go out on the veranda and look at the scenery.
- F: Right.
- That's why we came to Hawaii.
- M: Yeah.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: Let's go out on the veranda and look at the scenery.
F: Right. That's why we came to Hawaii.
M: Yeah. Here in Hawaii, flowers bloom and birds sing allthe year round.
No. 2
M: This is the worst movie I've ever seen!
F: It couldn't be worse than "Last match", the one we saw last week.
No. 1
M: Let's go out on the veranda and look at the scenery.
F: Right. That's why we came to Hawaii.
M: Yeah. Here in Hawaii, flowers bloom and birds sing all
No. 2
M: This is the worst movie I've ever seen!
F: It couldn't be worse than "Last match", the one we saw last week.
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No. 1
M: Let's go out on the veranda and enjoy the scenery.
F: Ok. That's why we came to Hawaii. Isn't it?
M: Yeah. In Hawaii, the flowers bloom and the birds sing all year round.
No. 2
M: This is the worst movie I've ever seen!
F: It couldn't be worse than "Last Match" which we saw last week.
M: Ok. Well we shouldn't have come to see
M: Let's go out on the veranda and enjoy the scenery.
F: Ok. That's why we came to Hawaii. Isn't it?
M: Yeah. In Hawaii, the flowers bloom and the birds sing all year round.
No. 2
M: This is the worst movie I've ever seen!
F: It couldn't be worse than "Last Match" which we saw last week.
M: Ok. Well we shouldn't have come to see
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