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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Will you correct my English? ( Apr. 11 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Hello. This is publicity department. [ How ] May I help you?
F: Yes. Is Mr.Yates in?
M: Sorry. He's in the editorial department now. I'll transfer you [ I'll put you through ].
No. 2
M: Try walking around in those shoes and see how they feel.
F: Hmm. They look great, but I'm not sure. Let me try some more like
these?
M: Sure. I'll get you another pair.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Hello. This is publicity department. [ How ] May I help you?
F: Yes. Is Mr.Yates in?
M: Sorry. He's in the editorial department now. I'll transfer you [ I'll put you through ].
No. 2
M: Try walking around in those shoes and see how they feel.
F: Hmm. They look great, but I'm not sure. Let me try some more like
these?
M: Sure. I'll get you another pair.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: Publicity department. How may I help you?
- Hi, No.
- 1 M: Publicity department.
- How may I help you?
- Yates in, please?
- M: Please hold on and I'll transfer you [ I'll put you through ].
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Hi,
No. 1
M: Publicity department. How may I help you? (this sounds like you are a recptionist)
F: Is Mr.Yates in, please?
M: Please hold on and I'll transfer you [ I'll put you through ].
No. 2
M: Try walking around and see how they feel.
F: Hmm. They look great, but I'm not sure. Can I try some more like
these, pleas
No. 1
M: Publicity department. How may I help you? (this sounds like you are a recptionist)
F: Is Mr.Yates in, please?
M: Please hold on and I'll transfer you [ I'll put you through ].
No. 2
M: Try walking around and see how they feel.
F: Hmm. They look great, but I'm not sure. Can I try some more like
these, pleas
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