0
Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Will you correct my English?
0 Hello. I made two dialogs. If there are any mistakes, will you correct them? 02 br
02 br
00 No.1 Let's play tennis. 02 br
02 br
00 F: I can't play tennis well, and I don't have a racket. 02 br
02 br
00 M: Don't worry. I have two rackets and I'll teach you how to play. 02 br
02 br
00 F: Good. May I take my boyfriend with me? 02 br
02 br
00 M: Well,...of course,...yes. 02 br
02 br
00 No.2 Take out garbage 02 br
02 br
00 M: What day is a gargage day? 02 br
02 br
00 F: Again? How many times do I have to tell it to you? 02 br
00 It's TODAY! The garbage truck will be coming soon. 02 br
02 br
00 M: Darn it, I have to take the garbage out now. 02 br
02 br
00 Thank you! 0-
02 br
00 No.1 Let's play tennis. 02 br
02 br
00 F: I can't play tennis well, and I don't have a racket. 02 br
02 br
00 M: Don't worry. I have two rackets and I'll teach you how to play. 02 br
02 br
00 F: Good. May I take my boyfriend with me? 02 br
02 br
00 M: Well,...of course,...yes. 02 br
02 br
00 No.2 Take out garbage 02 br
02 br
00 M: What day is a gargage day? 02 br
02 br
00 F: Again? How many times do I have to tell it to you? 02 br
00 It's TODAY! The garbage truck will be coming soon. 02 br
02 br
00 M: Darn it, I have to take the garbage out now. 02 br
02 br
00 Thank you! 0-
Top answer
02 b 02 br 02 br 00 F: Good. can I bring my boyfriend with me? NO NO NO !!!
- 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 F: Good.
- can I bring my boyfriend with me?
- NO NO NO !!!
- 02 font 01 font 00 nobody say´s ¨darn it¨ !
- (Well maybe some Americans) 02 font 02 b 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Say something like ****!
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
3 Answers
0
0 hi ..how are ya ? 02 br
02 br
00 this might help .. 02 br
02 br
00 F: I can't play tennis well, and I don't have a racket. 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 Native English: I´m not 05 0 00 good at playing tennis..plus I don't have a racket, so I cant play. 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 F: Good. May I take my boyfriend with me? 02 br
02 br
00 this might help .. 02 br
02 br
00 F: I can't play tennis well, and I don't have a racket. 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 Native English: I´m not 05 0 00 good at playing tennis..plus I don't have a racket, so I cant play. 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 F: Good. May I take my boyfriend with me? 02 br
00
0 Hi Kenta. 02 br
02 br
00 Your first dialogue is okay except for the "May I take my boyfriend with me?" Use "Can my boyfriend come too?" But either way, that's really odd. If someone invites you to play a game with two people, you don't say "Oh, I have a third person and I want him to come too." It's rude and impracticle - he has two rackets. 02 br
02 br
00 M: Wh
02 br
00 Your first dialogue is okay except for the "May I take my boyfriend with me?" Use "Can my boyfriend come too?" But either way, that's really odd. If someone invites you to play a game with two people, you don't say "Oh, I have a third person and I want him to come too." It's rude and impracticle - he has two rackets. 02 br
02 br
00 M: Wh
00
1 b 00 I can't play tennis well, and I don't have a racket. 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 Darn it, I have to take the garbage out now. 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 Of course there are other ways to express these ideas, but both of these original sentences are fine. 02 br
02 br
00 And Anthony -- if you are going to "shout" 01 font
02 br
01 b 00 Darn it, I have to take the garbage out now. 02 b 02 br
02 br
00 Of course there are other ways to express these ideas, but both of these original sentences are fine. 02 br
02 br
00 And Anthony -- if you are going to "shout" 01 font
0
Related Questions