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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
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Will you correct my English?

0Hello. Will you check the dialogues I wrote?02br
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00No.102br
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00M: Hi, Jean. Can I bother you for a sec(ond)?02br
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00F: Just a moment... OK, what?02br
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00M: You've been to African countries on business (trips), haven't you?02br
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00F: Yes, many times. I've been to almost all the countries there.02br
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00No.202br
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00M: Are these your children?02br
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00F: Yes, they are. Here's Emily. She is six. This is Jack. He just02br
00 turned three.02br
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00M: You have a very nice-looking family. (This means her family looks very happy. Is this OK?)02br
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00F: I'd be happier if my husband were here with us.02br
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00 Thank you.0-
  

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112br 12br 10M: Hi, Jean. 12br 12br 10F: Just a moment... OK, what?

— BarbaraPA

  • 112br 12br 10M: Hi, Jean.
  • 12br 12br 10F: Just a moment...
  • OK, what?
  • 11font 10The "Just a moment" seems a bit odd.
  • " is a bit abrupt.
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10No.112br
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10M: Hi, Jean. Can I bother you for a sec(ond)?12br
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10F: Just a moment... OK, what? 11font10The "Just a moment" seems a bit odd. "Okay, what?" is a bit abrupt. "Sure, just hold on a moment while I finish this... okay, what'
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