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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
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Will you check my English?
Hello. Will you correct my English if any?
M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri.
F: They were [are] just sold out.
Why don't you try the magazine stand over there?
M: OK. I heard there's an article about my university on the
front page.
Thank you!
M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri.
F: They were [are] just sold out.
Why don't you try the magazine stand over there?
M: OK. I heard there's an article about my university on the
front page.
Thank you!
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Hello. Will Can you correct my English if any? M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri.
- Hello.
- Will Can you correct my English if any?
- M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri.
- F: They Its were just sold out.
- you can try the magazine stand over there?
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Hello. Will Can you correct my English if any?
M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri.
F:They Its were just sold out.
you can try the magazine stand over there?
M: OK. I heard there's an article about my university on the
front page.
M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri.
F:
you can try the magazine stand over there?
M: OK. I heard there's an article about my university on the
front page.
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I'm very sorry, but I don't agree to your comments.
Q Why should I write "Can you ..."? I think "Will you correct ... " is fine.
Q Is "Its were ..." right? I've never seen the expression, "Its were".
I hope other members will help me. Thank you.
Q Why should I write "Can you ..."? I think "Will you correct ... " is fine.
Q Is "Its were ..." right? I've never seen the expression, "Its were".
I hope other members will help me. Thank you.
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Kenta, in my opinion, it's more polite to say "Could you ...?" Its less demanding. Your version is also correct. It basically says, are you willing to corect...? but note that it's less graceful. Just my thought.
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The third sentence is unclear. 'Why don't you try the magazine stand over there?'
How can a person TRY A MAGAZINE STAND?
Instead: 'How about the magazines on that stand, they are similar to Daily Yomiuri'
How can a person TRY A MAGAZINE STAND?
Instead: 'How about the magazines on that stand, they are similar to Daily Yomiuri'
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Hello. Will Can you correct my English if any? Could you correct my English if there are any mistakes please?
M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri. - OK
F:They Its were just sold out. - It's just sold out
you can try the magazine stand over there? - You can try the magazine stand over there.
M: I need two copies of today's Daily Yomiuri. - OK
F:
you can try the magazine stand over there? - You can try the magazine stand over there.
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optilangCould you correct my English if there are any mistakes please?I think, strictly speaking, a comma is needed after 'mistakes'. (... mistakes, please?)
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hi
which is rhe right one to say
print for me or print to me every week on saturday
pleas advice me
which is rhe right one to say
print for me or print to me every week on saturday
pleas advice me
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