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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Will you check my dialogues?

0Hello. Will you correct my English?02br
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00M: Why is this printer so much more expensive than the laser printer?02br
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00F: The quality of the printout is five times sharper than that of 02br
00 the laser printer.02br
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00M: Incredible! I wonder how much it is.02br
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00No.202br
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00M: Could you give me a hand with this?02br
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00F: Wyh don't we tilt it on its side?02br
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00M: Be careful. It's the thing which has been handed down from 02br
00 generation to generation.02br
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00 Thank you!0-
  

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02br 02br 00M: Incredible! I wonder how much 01b 00sharper02b 00 it is. 02br 02br 00F: 01b 00Why02b 00 don't we tilt it on its side?

— Badegine

  • 02br 02br 00M: Incredible!
  • I wonder how much 01b 00sharper02b 00 it is.
  • 02br 02br 00F: 01b 00Why02b 00 don't we tilt it on its side?
  • [01i 00typo]02i 02br 02br 00M: Be careful.
  • It's 01b 00something that02b 00 has been handed down from 02br 00 generation to generation.
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0Sure.02br
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00No.102br
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00M: Why is this printer so much more expensive than the laser 01b00one02b00?01i00 [avoid using the same noun twice in a comparative sentence - it's correct to, but stylistically not perfect]02i02br
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00F: The quality of the printout is five times sharp
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0Thank you. You helped me a lot!0-
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0Kenta, I can't make "I wonder how much it is" make sense.02br
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00He obviously knows the price, because he commented on it.02br
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00He now knows how much sharper it is, because she just told him it was five times sharper.02br
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00What did you mean for him to be asking?0-
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