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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Will someone please proof-read this and provide feedback?

0 I had just recently posted for help w/ writing a letter to a judge but no one replied, so I gave it my best shot, and wish that someone will just proof-read this and let me know what else it may need.02br
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00*All names and addresses have been blanked out for security purposes.02br
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00Samantha 02br
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00The Honorable Judge 01i00______02i02br
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00Address, 02br
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00Case Number:_01i00______________02i02br
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00 00Dear Judge 01i00________02i00,02br
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00 00 00My name is Samantha, and I am writing to you regarding my case. I was in 00 on vacation recently visiting my cousins. On the 1801sup00th02sup00 day of January, I was arrested for retail theft in 01i00____02i00 Surf Shop located on 00 in 00. Words cannot explain my embarrassment and regret, and there is no excuse as to what I did. I want to apologize on behalf of 00 00, and the State of 00 for my actions. I have never violated the law and this will be my first and last time. 00 02br
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00I did, however, receive my citation in the mail. It states that I must appear in court on Wednesday, February 701sup00th02sup00. Unfortunately, I am not able to appear at this time. I reside in NY and am a part-time worker and full-time student. I would like to request, if possible, to perhaps handle the case by mail. If I have any other options, please let me know.02br
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00I appreciate your time and consideration.02br
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00Thank you.02br
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00Sincerely,02br
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00Samantha0-
  

Top answer

0Hi,02br 02br 00I've tried to help with your English, but I know nothing about the legal aspect of this. I wonder if it is the judge him/herself or the clerk of his court that you should be writing to? Have you considered checking with a lawyer?

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00I've tried to help with your English, but I know nothing about the legal aspect of this.
  • I wonder if it is the judge him/herself or the clerk of his court that you should be writing to?
  • Have you considered checking with a lawyer?
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 01i 00Put your address in the right corner.
  • 02i 00 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Address, NY 02br 02font 02br 02br 01font 00The Honorable Judge 01i 00______02i 00,02br 02font 02br 02br 01font 00_______County Court,02font 02br 02br 01font 00Address, Fla.
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0Hi,02br
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00I've tried to help with your English, but I know nothing about the legal aspect of this. I wonder if it is the judge him/herself or the clerk of his court that you should be writing to? Have you considered checking with a lawyer? It might be a good idea to spend a little money to do that.02br
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00Good luck with this matter.02br


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