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Abil Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

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0 Can someone check if there is any mistake in the following sentence:02br
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00Although Che Sung tried to harm him in many different ways, he was saved and the illegal occupation of his land could be staved off because of the fact that the administration was somewhat neutral at that time. 0-
  

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0Its fine. It could be improved but grammatically it's fine. 0-

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  • It could be improved but grammatically it's fine.
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0Its fine. It could be improved but grammatically it's fine. 0-
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0 Dear Anonymous,02br
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00Thanks a lot. 0-
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0 It could be improved in some ways, it's OK - but two easy things you could do:02br
00- Put a comma after "saved".02br
00- "could be" needs to change to "was"; OR "was able to be" might be even better.0-
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0 Dear Forum Guru,02br
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00Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Actually, this is a part of an article I am translating into english. I will remember not to use "because of the fact that" clause.02br
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