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Mizanur Posted 11 years ago
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Will be grateful if somebody correct the following sentences:

Will be grateful if somebody correct the following sentences:

1. I used a broad theoretical framework to capture both national and international players to whom/those NGOs are supposed to accountable.

2. Different international bodies use the NGO report on various issues as a supplement to state report. State report is often so blurred and incomplete, and so NGOs’ reports are really crucial. The scholars give the name of NGOs’ report as the shadow report.

3. In this backdrop, this programme will provide me with wider perspective of different international issue, political topics and will provide me with adequate analytical tools and research skills.

4. This track is tailored for those who want to work in developing countries with/for international organization.

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Here are my suggestions (in bold and strikeout): 1. I used a broad theoretical framework to capture both the national and international players to whom /those NGOs are supposed to accountable. 2.

  • Here are my suggestions (in bold and strikeout): 1.
  • I used a broad theoretical framework to capture both the national and international players to whom /those NGOs are supposed to accountable.
  • 2.
  • Different international bodies use the an NGO report on various issues as a supplement to the state report.
  • State report s are is often vague so blurred and incomplete, and so NGOs’ reports are really crucial.
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Here are my suggestions (in bold and strikeout):

1. I used a broad theoretical framework to capture both the national and international players to whom /those NGOs are supposed to accountable.

2. Different international bodies use the an NGO report on various issues as a supplement to the state report. State reports are

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