Yes, it makes sense. The sentence does not appear to need a question mark, and the comma also seems unnecessary to me. I have never come across this verb "to silk".
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Mr Wordyfelt out of keeping with the poetic nature of the rest of sentence
AngliholicIs it right to interpret the above you wrote as "was necessary to keep with the poetic nature ...?"No, I don't think so. "out of keeping" means something like "inappropriate". My immediate feeling was that the word "silking" did not fit with the poetic intention.