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Angliholic Posted 16 years ago
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Will a bee feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflower

Will a bee, I wonder, feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflower in the green green grass of nature/pasture.

Hi,

I jotted the above down on my blog to practice writing, but I'm afraid it may sound wrong. So, please rectify it if it does sound odd. Thanks.
  

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Hi, Will a bee, I wonder, feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflower s in the green , green grass of nature /pasture . I jotted the above down on my blog to practice writing, but I'm afraid it may sound wrong. So, please rectify it if it does sound odd.

  • Hi, Will a bee, I wonder, feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflower s in the green , green grass of nature /pasture .
  • I jotted the above down on my blog to practice writing, but I'm afraid it may sound wrong.
  • So, please rectify it if it does sound odd.
  • Thanks I think it's a lovely thought.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Will a bee, I wonder, feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflowers in the green, green grass of nature/pasture.

I jotted the above down on my blog to practice writing, but I'm afraid it may sound wrong. So, please rectify it if it does sound odd. Thanks

I think it's a lovely thought.



Clive
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Thanks, Clive, for the correction and kind words.

There are more to add to the sentence in question. Is the following all right?

Will a bee, I wonder, feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflowers in the green, green grass of nature with colorful petals flying here and there like confetti in the midst of a spring pasture.
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Hi,

Will a bee, I wonder, feel nostagic for the sweet nectars of wildflowers in the green, green grass of nature with colorful petals flying here and there like confetti in the midst of a spring pasture?

Why are the petals flying hereand there? Is someone throwing them around?

Personally, I don't find the image of petals being like confetti very appealing.
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Thanks, Clive, for the advice.

For what it's worth, it's the spring breeze that is blowing those flower petals here and there.

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