Wide stride
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"After receiving the news, he made a grim face, and withdrew from the terrace on a wide stride, without even saying good-bye to any of the people gathered there."
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Christine Christie Is this sentence correct: Nope. You can't go anywhere "on a wide stride". Besides, a stride is rather wide to begin with.
- Christine Christie Is this sentence correct: Nope.
- You can't go anywhere "on a wide stride".
- Besides, a stride is rather wide to begin with.
- You have two unnecessary commas, too.
- "After" is not ideal.
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Christine ChristieIs this sentence correct:
Nope. You can't go anywhere "on a wide stride". Besides, a stride is rather wide to begin with. You have two unnecessary commas, too. "After" is not ideal.
"Upon receiving the news, he made a grim face and strode from the terrace without even saying good-bye to any of the people gathered there."
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