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Trsh Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Wich sentence is more correct

a) Interactive touch screen application for effective business advertising and improved customer experience

b) Interactive touch screen application for effective business advertising to improve customer experience

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First, avoid the expression 'more correct' - it either is or it isn't correct. Second, since neither of these is a complete sentence, it is hard to judge whether it is a label or piece of advertising.

  • First, avoid the expression 'more correct' - it either is or it isn't correct.
  • Second, since neither of these is a complete sentence, it is hard to judge whether it is a label or piece of advertising.
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First, avoid the expression 'more correct' - it either is or it isn't correct.

Second, since neither of these is a complete sentence, it is hard to judge whether it is a label or piece of advertising.

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