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Speedoz Posted 16 years ago
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Why would you like to work with us?

I appreciate if you could go through my answer below and modify it if needed.

With multi-cultural team of over 150 nationalities, I think that (Company name) is such a great place to work. Also the tax free salary benefits, and the professional development opportunities that the (Company name) offers to help employees develop new skills and grow their careers successfully.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: With multi -cultural team of over 150 nationalities, I think that (Company name) is such a great place to work. Also the tax free salary benefits, and the professional development opportunities that the (Company name) offers to help employees develop new skills and grow their careers successfully. ( In addition, the last is not a complete sentence.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas: With multi -cultural team of over 150 nationalities, I think that (Company name) is such a great place to work.
  • Also the tax free salary benefits, and the professional development opportunities that the (Company name) offers to help employees develop new skills and grow their careers successfully.
  • ( In addition, the last is not a complete sentence.
  • ) If this is to appear in a formal document, 'great place' is far too vague and casual.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

With multi-cultural team of over 150 nationalities, I think that (Company name) is such a great place to work. Also the tax free salary benefits, and the professional development opportunities that the (Company name) offers to help employees develop new skills and grow their careers successfully. (
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