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Kiên Nguyễn Đức Posted 6 years ago
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Why the rate of the studetns coming from poor families or rural areas falls.

These days, the percentage of the student coming from poor families and rural areas fell considerably. In this essay, I will discuss in detail the reasons associated with it and give solutions to deal with it

The main reasons are caused by the lack of care for studying of student’s parents and government. There is much research about rural school claims that a lot of schools in these areas have the poor structures and don’t have even basic facility supporting for teaching and studying such as textbook, projectors, etc. This is because the government hasn’t had enough care about the facility for studying in rural areas. What’s more, students also don’t have enough time to study. This is believed to be caused by their parents, who only want their own children to help them do housework, farm work, etc.

One possible way to solve this problem is to prompt the care of the government of parents in studying of students in rural areas or coming from poor families.First of all, the government is making significant changes in the structure of rural schools,but it is not enough. Thus, they need to make more considerable changes in this problem. Moreover, the reason why parents don’t take notice of their child’s study is the lack of knowledge about the importance of studying. As a result, we need to improve their knowledge by operating presentations, publishing newspapers,etc about the importance of studying.

In conclusion, the lack of care from the government and parents play a great role in making the rate the students coming from rural areas or poor families falls sharply. The best solution for this problem is to improve the care from them.

  

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