Past perfect tense is OK there (he had been a member at some earlier time, before the plaque was erected). "this honor society" doesn't sound right. It could be that you mean "this honorable society".
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Mister Micawber'Honor society' is a reasonably common AmE termOh, OK, thanks, I didn't know that, but I should have looked it up...