Hello, I migrated to the Boston, USA as visa student from Hong Kong 3 years ago and I think my language skills in the English language are okay. <br/><br/>However, when I submitted my essay, the instructor marked the following wrong? <br/><br/>"Despite all my struggles, I still did not draw too good" <br/><br/>- the instructor circled "good", why? <br/><br/>and also<br/><br/>"If you hire me, your sure to be amazed at my abilities"<br/><br/>- why was "your" also circled? <br/><br/>The instructor took off several marks unfairly.