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Moon7296 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Why-> Curisous, she drew ~~~ to a new rock hit.

Her students looked at her in surprise. Curious, she drew closer and found that the students were listening to a new rock hit.

When I first saw 'Curious' at the begining of the second sentence, I didn't understand how an adjective can stand separately.

Q1) Now I think something must be omitted, mustn't it?(Is this correct tag questionEmotion: smile?)

Q2) Is being omitted in front of 'curious?'

Q3) And when they are put in full formal, are they 'Because/as I was curious, she drew~?'
  

Top answer

Dear Moon I think your "Q3" is about right. " then you can leave out the "Because" clause and replace it with an adjective or adjectival phrase at the beginning of the sentence. Here are some examples..

  • Dear Moon I think your "Q3" is about right.
  • " then you can leave out the "Because" clause and replace it with an adjective or adjectival phrase at the beginning of the sentence.
  • Here are some examples..
  • - Why did she draw closer to the students who had looked at her in surprise?
  • [Question in your mind] - Because she was curious, she drew closer to the students [Long answer, with because] - Curious, she drew closer to the students [Acceptable short sentence] - Why does that building seem more modern now?
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Dear Moon

I think your "Q3" is about right. I cannot give you the exact rules but, in English, if your sentence is dealing mainly with the question "Why?" then you can leave out the "Because" clause and replace it with an adjective or adjectival phrase at the beginning of the sentence. Here are some examples..

- Why did she draw closer to the students who had looked at her in s
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Wow,, this is awesome..

I didn't know omitting 'Because ~' sounds more modern. It's good to know.

Then, how does this omition apply in speaking and writing?; does it make the sentences sound formal or informal?

One more question, if I say 'having painted green~,' and not 'painted green' in your example, does 'having' imply the tense of the original sentence is the
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Dear Moon

As said, I'm not sure of the exact rules, but the general idea of missing out the "Why / Because" of a sentence works in many areas of English..

Informal

- Bought a new car! - you must be short of money now

[= Because you bought a new car, I guess you have no money left now]

- Saw John yesterday: wearing a new suit, he looked a whole lot smart
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Ah.. I find a synonymous expression 'now that' for 'because' in this pattern.

I got a clear idea from your in-depth analysis..

I seems I find new stuffs by asking here even if I think I know about something a lot.

It's very glad to see a nice helper like you.

Thank you very much.

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