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Pilita Posted 22 years ago
Grammar
Whta is wrong with this sentence
One of these traditions is that family always stay together. Is this a complete sentence?
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does it sounds right?
- does it sounds right?
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. Carmen, the mother, is dramatic and strict moral values and Ana is open minded and insecure.does it sounds right?
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It should read
'..and has strict moral values...'
However it sounds as though you are making a comparison between Carmen and Ana. The attributes 'strict moral values' and 'open minded' certainly contrast nicely, but there is no such connection between 'dramatic' and 'insecure', so the sentence sounds a little odd.
If you are making a comparison it would be stonger to rep
'..and has strict moral values...'
However it sounds as though you are making a comparison between Carmen and Ana. The attributes 'strict moral values' and 'open minded' certainly contrast nicely, but there is no such connection between 'dramatic' and 'insecure', so the sentence sounds a little odd.
If you are making a comparison it would be stonger to rep
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thank you for your suggestions! It was a contrasting essay.
sincerely,
pilita
sincerely,
pilita
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