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Navitasan Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Whose renown

Are these sentences both correct:
1-James, whose renown had spread far and wide as a boxer, decided to stop boxing.
2-James, whose renown as a boxer had spread far and wide, decided to stop boxing.

Gratefully,
Navi.
  

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I prefer the second sentence since James's renown is not a boxer. CB

  • I prefer the second sentence since James's renown is not a boxer.
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I prefer the second sentence since James's renown is not a boxer.

CB

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