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Shalom,
John was a lonely boy whose only friends were those with bad habits, debts, or bad temper.
Is the above fine or is there a way to improve it? I want to show that John only has friends in these categories, so basically he's lonely.
thank you so much.
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anonymous Shalom How. anonymous s the above fine or is there a way to improve it? When you write, there is almost always a way to improve it.
- anonymous Shalom How.
- anonymous s the above fine or is there a way to improve it?
- When you write, there is almost always a way to improve it.
- Writing is mainly revision.
- A bald statement has power.
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anonymousShalom
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anonymouss the above fine or is there a way to improve it?
When you write, there is almost always a way to improve it. Writing is mainly revision.
A bald statement has power. Repetition has rhythm. Keep lists parallel. Rule one for all writing in "mind the sense" (Lewis Carroll said mind
0I'd put the two 'bad's together and keep them all plural.
John was a lonely boy whose only friends had bad habits, bad tempers, or debts.
CJ
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