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GS3301 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Who would like to check my letter for spelling/grammar Mistakes ?
I was shortening my letter already cuz it's too long but it isn't that easy for me. I am german and drift always into too long sentences!
Dear Ms. Dalby,
I am interested if your company is currently offering any entry positions within the area of the Stewarding & Housekeeping department in which I would like to be considered for all physical work such as Dishwasher, Kitchen Steward, Spa Cleaner, Housekeeper and where else cleaning experience would be an asset.
If such position becomes available, it would be great if you give me the opportunity to discuss your needs and objectives. I am very reliable and focused on my work, cooperatively and decidedly friendly to the hotel guests.
The last 9 month I have worked in the [...] Lodge at [...] in , in which I got the chance to gain valuable experience in the following departments such as Housekeeping, Stewarding, and Spa. In my job I improved as room attendant & night cleaner a lot of my productivity and efficiency.
The previous experience is a good foundation for a new job opportunity for an entry to mid level position in your company and I am willing to develop further skills.
Should any position be available within the near future, I hope that you'll find my experience and interests intriguing enough to warrant a personal meeting, as I am confident that I could provide value to you and your customers as a member of your team.
Thank you for taking the time and consideration and I look forward to hear from you about any employment opportunity.
Respectfully yours,
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Dear Ms. Dalby, I am interested in fnding out if your company is currently offering any entry positions within the area of the Stewarding & Housekeeping department. I would like to be considered for any role such as Dishwasher, Kitchen Steward, Spa Cleaner, Housekeeper or anything else where my cleaning experience would be an asset.
- Dear Ms.
- Dalby, I am interested in fnding out if your company is currently offering any entry positions within the area of the Stewarding & Housekeeping department.
- I would like to be considered for any role such as Dishwasher, Kitchen Steward, Spa Cleaner, Housekeeper or anything else where my cleaning experience would be an asset.
- ] in Canada, in which I got the chance to gain valuable experience in the following departments: Housekeeping, Stewarding, and Spa.
- I acquired good skills as a room attendant & night cleaner and put a lot of effort into my productivity and efficiency.
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Dear Ms. Dalby,
I am interested in fnding out if your company is currently offering any entry positions within the area of the Stewarding & Housekeeping department. I would like to be considered for any role such as Dishwasher, Kitchen Steward, Spa Cleaner, Housekeeper or anything
I am interested in fnding out if your company is currently offering any entry positions within the area of the Stewarding & Housekeeping department. I would like to be considered for any role such as Dishwasher, Kitchen Steward, Spa Cleaner, Housekeeper or anything
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hey nona the brit, thank you so much! You really made my day a lot easier. kind regards from Canada
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