Dear friend, a general rule holds that 'who' should be used in the position of a subject. If you simplify your sentence by dividing it into two simple ones: Then he made some notes for the owner, Melanie. + Melanie (subject) was also the cook on the second shift (predicate), you'll see that Melanie as the subject of the second sentence should be replaced by who , and not whom.
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