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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Who do you feel close to in your family?

Hello,

is my paragraph correct?

  • In my family I feel very close to my mother. My mother is very a logical and open-minded person despite our age difference we understand each other very well. Therefore, we talk about different topics without having any discussion. For example, even though she knows that I'm an atheist , she has never opposed my idea nor forced my to practice Islam. And, it has never created any gap between us. Second, she is not a prejudice or conservative person as well. Therefore, I feel more comfortable to talk to my mother than my sisters and seek advice about my personal problems. That's why she is very close to me.

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Hi. Let me gove it a shot; In my family I feel very close to my mother. My mother is a very logical and open-minded person .

  • Hi.
  • Let me gove it a shot; In my family I feel very close to my mother.
  • My mother is a very logical and open-minded person .
  • D espite our age s difference we understand each other very well.
  • Therefore, we talk about different topics without having any arguments .
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Hi.

Let me gove it a shot;

In my family I feel very close to my mother. My mother is a very logical and open-minded person. Despite our ages difference we understand each other very well. Therefore, we talk about different topics without having any arguments. For example, even though she knows that I'm an atheist , she has never opposed my idea nor
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quaereeverumTherefore, we talk about different topics without having any discussion.
This sentence looks extremely non-sense to me.

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