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The_Ancestral_Eagle Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Who can work this out ??

Peace be upon u ..

A little problem faced me while trying to rewrite this sentence .

Frankly , I couldn't put the suitable verb before the noun ..

I let u with the sentence hoping to rewrite it ..

** The boy was punished because he made alot of mistakes .

(Rewrite the previous sentence using " punishment " )

Thanks alot ..

I'm waiting the answer .
  

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Try a phrase like 'deserved punishment'.

  • Try a phrase like 'deserved punishment'.
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Try a phrase like 'deserved punishment'.
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Hi Ancestral Eagle - may I suggest that you start getting into the habit of using "you" instead of "u," since we're praticing using standard English. Also, a common error even for native English speakers is to write "alot," but it's two words - a lot.

Anway, does the sentence have to start with "punishment" - that would make it very passive. Punishment was administered...

But if
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also, perhaps:
went through punishment
suffered punishment
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Davkett ..

Thanks alot for your guidance ..
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Grammar Geek ,

may I suggest that you start getting into the habit of using "you" instead of "u," since we're praticing using standard English



Yes , of course . I'll do that from this very moment . Thanks alot G G .

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Marius Hancu ,

Great to see your name in here ..



Thanks alot .

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