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HAEIN KIM Posted 8 years ago
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I wrote about today's happening.

I'm very beginner to start to study English.


I twisted my left ankle two weeks ago while I was playing basketball. It was my first time getting injured on left ankle. It was so hurt that I even can't walk. To make matters worse, It was hard to find hospital because it didn't open hospital on the weekend afternoon. I was kept calling to hospital nearby and finally I could find one. After I was taking a X-ray on my ankle, I knew that it was not bone problem but ligament problem. It was a happy feature of a misfortune. The doctor said to me, "You don't have to worry about my injures. All you have to do is just take a rest few days."


After a week, however, My ankle kept bothering me. I visited the Oriental medical clinic. I was not certain that it is really effective to my injuries. I just went there because many friends of mine had recommended me to go there. I've been there for three days. I think it is effective. Some people say that it is not scientific. Also, I don't know whether it is scientific or not. But The important thing is that my ankle is getting better. So I'm gonna recommend the Oriental medical clinic whoever get injured.


I was kind of person who believes western medical method. but, Korea and China have a very traditional way of heal patients. That explains that our body is the whole one thing. So even if you get injured on your ankle, Doctor could did treatment on your waist. When you get injured on your knee, the doctor could do acupuncture on your neck. That is quiet interesting.


  

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I corrected your entire essay, but I had trouble with my laptop and couldn't save it for you. I'm so sorry. I have to run now and don't have time to do it again.

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  • I have to run now and don't have time to do it again.
  • If your essay is still here for correcting tomorrow, I'll do it again for you and send it.
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I corrected your entire essay, but I had trouble with my laptop and couldn't save it for you. I'm so sorry. I have to run now and don't have time to do it again. If your essay is still here for correcting tomorrow, I'll do it again for you and send it. I'm so sorry. Your essay is good, especially for a beginning English student. I hope to communicate with you tomorrow.

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