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Giang Nguyen Châu Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Who am I?

Hi, my name’s Nguyen Chau Giang and I am currently a student in class 7c3 of Tran Phu Secondary school.

Well, I am not anyone who’s special, neither do my family. Why do I say that i am not special at all of some may think that: no! Everyone must have their own special ability. But no, I am saying this for real! About my hobby, I like reading books and listening to music like everyone, in the future I just want to be a successful business woman. Well, I am not perfect at all ( In fact no one is perfect). As we go through this life we have, we must accept and realize that nobody is perfect in the world, and human nature makes all kinds of mistakes. I believe that when people make mistakes, its really important to never repeat it again and learn from the first time. We make mistakes on tests, we make mistakes on choosing our better half who ends up to be the total opposite of who you had known from before, we make mistakes on our work, in our homes, in choosing friends who are really not that great to be around with and hanging out with the wrong crowds. These can all be corrected when we make the right choices in life and when we are selective and very careful about associating with types of people there are in the world. Making mistakes is part of human nature, but we must also realize to prevent from the same things to happen again not just that making mistakes also have many advantages, too! They help you grow, as long as you recognize them and learn from them. Many parents want to protect their kids from making mistakes, this is a mistake!The kids have not learned how to deal with rejection and how to handle making mistakes. But making mistakes is for us to stand up and do it again like failure is mother's success. So I like to be failure sometimes ( it’s pretty weird tho...) because it helps me to be more confident about it. I have some weak points too which is very common to some people is impatient and I am pretty argressive too! However the is some reasons in why I get agressive too easily because I am impatient. Beinig impatient and too agressive makes me to be more careful about the things around me and push me to finish my work in time, eventhough to some people that maybe feel pretty bad about the characteristics but still I find it useful, too! Now about my dream I wanted to be a successful business woman like an CEO of a famous copany, but sometimes I wanted to work as a role in the government, the reason why I wanted to be a part of the government is pretty long though. I have thought about the future when I have a chance of becoming the president( It will be great!). I will change things in our country and make our country from a developing country to developed country and create a better enviroment for the citizens in the country to live in a good society. I n the future not just wanting to be a successful CEO or a role in the government but some activities to do in the summer and before getting a job too!. Firstly I would like to go donated for a week every summer so that I can help the children in the mountainous area. Not just that I really want to get into Tran Phu highschool because that will make my parents so proud of me! Not just that I really want to land in the Trade University so that I can easily go abroad and get a job!A So that’s all about me. Thank you for listening!

  

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You should separate your writing into paragraphs.

  • You should separate your writing into paragraphs.
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You should separate your writing into paragraphs.

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