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Ann225 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Whip up, swirl around

"Whenever I make my bed, it causes dust to swirl around."

"Whenever I make my bed, I whip up a lot of dust."

"I just dusted my room, but then I had to make the bed and I whipped up a lot of dust as I flipped the duvet over and fluffed it."

Are these sentences correct and natural?

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The three sentences are understandable and technically correct, grammatically, but a little awkward-sounding (to American ears). You'd more likely hear something like the following: Whenever I make my bed, I stir up a lot of dust. I cleaned my room, but when I made my bed and fluffed-up the comforter, it stirred up a lot of dust.

  • The three sentences are understandable and technically correct, grammatically, but a little awkward-sounding (to American ears).
  • You'd more likely hear something like the following: Whenever I make my bed, I stir up a lot of dust.
  • I cleaned my room, but when I made my bed and fluffed-up the comforter, it stirred up a lot of dust.
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The three sentences are understandable and technically correct, grammatically, but a little awkward-sounding (to American ears). You'd more likely hear something like the following:


Whenever I make my bed, I stir up a lot of dust.


I cleaned my room, but when I made my bed and fluffed-up the comforter, it stirred up a lot of dust.

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