Hi
Is this sentence OK?
(She is taking a shower...)
While the warm shower splashed all over her, she tried to find herself in the misted mirror.
Thanks,
Tom
Both are OK. #2 is a more poetical, fanciful version. Doesn't she use a shower curtain?
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Both are OK.
#2 is a more poetical, fanciful version.
Doesn't she use a shower curtain?