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Mr. Tom Posted 8 years ago
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While the warm shower splashed all over her...

Hi

Is this sentence OK?

(She is taking a shower...)

While the warm shower splashed all over her, she tried to find herself in the misted mirror.


Thanks,

Tom

  

Top answer

Both are OK. #2 is a more poetical, fanciful version. Doesn't she use a shower curtain?

  • Both are OK.
  • #2 is a more poetical, fanciful version.
  • Doesn't she use a shower curtain?
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Both are OK.

#2 is a more poetical, fanciful version.


Doesn't she use a shower curtain?

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