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Mr. Tom Posted 5 years ago
Vocabulary

While the episode was on and the family

Hi

Are these lines fully natural?

(The speaker is talking about some old drama series that he and his family used to watch every week.)

While the episode was on and the family was glued to the television, my father would constantly wish for our police to be "half as good as the US's" in his words.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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Mr. Tom While the episode was on and the family was glued to the television, my father would constantly wish for our police to be "half as good as the US's" , in his words. The comma (or a dash) is essential.

  • Mr.
  • Tom While the episode was on and the family was glued to the television, my father would constantly wish for our police to be "half as good as the US's" , in his words.
  • The comma (or a dash) is essential.
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Mr. TomWhile the episode was on and the family was glued to the television, my father would constantly wish for our police to be "half as good as the US's", in his words.

The comma (or a dash) is essential.

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