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Mr. Tom Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

While taking a shower in the morning...

Hi

I am aware that the following sentence is a dangling modifier, but wouldn't it work at all in casual  English? Any suggestions are welcome.

While taking a shower in the morning, some water got into my ear and hasn't cleared?? yet.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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It would work adequately, I suppose, but this dangler is rather obvious. I would certainly change it: While I was taking a shower this morning, water got into my ear and it hasn't drained out yet.

  • It would work adequately, I suppose, but this dangler is rather obvious.
  • I would certainly change it: While I was taking a shower this morning, water got into my ear and it hasn't drained out yet.
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It would work adequately, I suppose, but this dangler is rather obvious. I would certainly change it:

While I was taking a shower this morning, water got into my ear and it hasn't drained out yet.
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Thanks, MM.

So can we also use "drain out" for eyes?

While I was taking playing in the garden this morning, something got got into my eye and it hasn't drained out yet.

Tom
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Mr. TomSo can we also use "drain out" for eyes?
Why would you assume that?
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Yes, MM; I asked this question because we don't have any volitional control over our ears; if water gets into them, we have to wait patiently until it drains out itself. Also, in my experience, it's only water that gets into our ears, so "drain out", to me, seems a reasonable phrase.

However, with eyes, the whole case is a different kettle of fish. When something gets into our eyes
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Mr. TomHowever, with eyes, the whole case is a different kettle of fish.
Yes, indeed—it is not water or a liquid that gets in them, which is critical to 'drained'.
Mr. TomSo, can we use "drain out" with eyes?
So, no.

While I was in the garden this morning, something got got into my eye and I haven't been able to

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