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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

While or when?

Would I use when or while for the sentence below?

I learned this when I had to translate for an upset patient who was denied IV sedation while I worked at an oral surgery practice.

In general, is this sentence grammatically correct? It sounds weird to me.
  

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I would reword this to use only one or the other. "When" and "while" are generally used for different situations. So they are seldom used together.

  • I would reword this to use only one or the other.
  • "When" and "while" are generally used for different situations.
  • So they are seldom used together.
  • "While" usually is for a duration, over a period of time.
  • "When" usually is for a particular time (short or long).
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I would reword this to use only one or the other. "When" and "while" are generally used for different situations. So they are seldom used together.
"While" usually is for a duration, over a period of time.
"When" usually is for a particular time (short or long).

If you want to combine them, you need place the "when" moment within a longer "while" period of time. This can be confu
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AnonymousI learned this when I had to translate for an upset patient who was denied IV sedation while I worked was working at an oral surgery practice.
Your original is grammatically correct, but I suggest a change above (in red) that you may want to consider. The continuous tense often works well after "while".

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