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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
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Please check the following sentences out. Which is accpetable or better?

(1) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, sat in the seat next to the front door, listenting to his Walkman.

(2) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, was sitting in the seat next to the front door and listening to his Walkman.

(3) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, was sitting in the seat next to the front door while listening to his Walkman.
  

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Hi, Please check the following sentences out. Which is accpetable All 3. or better?

  • Hi, Please check the following sentences out.
  • Which is accpetable All 3.
  • or better?
  • #1 is OK.
  • I prefer #3 to #2.
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Hi,
Please check the following sentences out.
Which is accpetable All 3.

or better? #1 is OK. I prefer #3 to #2.



(1) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, sat in the seat next to the front door, listenting to his Walkman.

(2) Mike, a young man with his yellow-

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