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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
While filming
Nadia looks out the window and sees a reporter and a cameraman walking toward the building while filming.
1) Is the sentence OK?
2) Is it clear that the reporter and cameraman are filming while walking toward the building?
3) Would it be better to leave out "while" so the sentence would end with "...toward the building, filming."?
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anonymous 1) Is the sentence OK? I couldn't tell who was filming what on first reading. For one thing, a reporter's cameraman has a video camera.
- anonymous 1) Is the sentence OK?
- I couldn't tell who was filming what on first reading.
- For one thing, a reporter's cameraman has a video camera.
- anonymous 2) Is it clear that the reporter and cameraman are filming while walking toward the building?
- No.
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anonymous1) Is the sentence OK?
I couldn't tell who was filming what on first reading. For one thing, a reporter's cameraman has a video camera.
anonymous2) Is it clear that the reporter and cameraman are filming while walking toward the building?
No.
anonymous3) Would it be better to le
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