While a battle ensues..

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While a battle ensues with Zsa Zsa and her men, Fuad soon learns the sorrowing truth; His father is no more. Fuad instructs his brothers to return home to take care of their departed father’s procession. Farid boldly objects, saying that they should stick together and bring Fara home. Meanwhile, Fara continues to struggle finding an escape route, until an opportunity presents itself in the form of a thug’s phone. Will she be able to escape the death trap?