While...?
Hi, everyone.
It was my first day after the recovery and she made my day while making up for the whole week's boredom.
Could you tell me whether I used "while" correctly in this sentence? How can I improve this sentence?
Thanks?
Top answer
silak12 after the recovery It's not clear what this means. What were you recovering from? Maybe you mean it was your first day after being discharged from the hospital?
- silak12 after the recovery It's not clear what this means.
- What were you recovering from?
- Maybe you mean it was your first day after being discharged from the hospital?
- silak12 she made my day while making up for the whole week's boredom.
- It's not good style to use the same verb multiple times so close together.
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silak12after the recovery
It's not clear what this means. What were you recovering from?
Maybe you mean it was your first day after being discharged from the hospital?
silak12she made my day while making up for the whole week's boredom.
It's not good style to use the same verb multiple times so
0It was the first day after my recovery and she made my day helping me forget about the whole week's boredom.
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