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Synonym Posted 15 years ago
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WHILE

Some little things are still going to hurt me while some may still make me happy, as unknowingly my heart still believes that you are only mine.

Few little things will go on hurting me while few may make me happy, as......

Please let me know if the above sentences are grammatically right.
  

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dec09 Some little things are still going to hurt me while some may still make me happy, as unknowingly my heart still believes that you are only mine. Few little things will go on hurting me while few may make me happy, as.. Please let me know if the above sentences are grammatically right.

  • dec09 Some little things are still going to hurt me while some may still make me happy, as unknowingly my heart still believes that you are only mine.
  • Few little things will go on hurting me while few may make me happy, as..
  • Please let me know if the above sentences are grammatically right.
  • They are grammatically correct, but it is difficult to understand what you mean at times.
  • The presence of "unknowingly" in the first sentence is strange.
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dec09Some little things are still going to hurt me while some may still make me happy, as unknowingly my heart still believes that you are only mine.
Few little things will go on hurting me while few may make me happy, as..
Please let me know if the above sentences are grammatically right.
They are grammatically correct, but it is difficult to under
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Thanks Califjim,

They are grammatically correct, but it is difficult to understand what you mean at times. May be because I am not able to use right words which I really mean..

[Some little things are still going to hurt me while some may still make me happy, as unknowingly my heart still believes that you are only mine.] unknowingly here I mean unconscious
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dec09So is there any other word which I can use in its place?
I was wondering about that myself. I was thinking that maybe you meant "subconsciously", but that seems too technical a word for the subject matter. This is a tough question. Did you mean something like "secretly" maybe?

CJ
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Thanks a lot Califjim this will surely work out.

But what is the difference between unconsciously and subconsciously?
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dec09But what is the difference between unconsciously and subconsciously?
You'd need to take a course in psychology to answer that. I'm not sure what the real difference is. All I know is that to me, unconscious suggests something like not paying attention, being unaware of what you're doing, as if asleep; whereas subconscious means, to me, s

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