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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Which word option is a better choice?

FYI-Gerard is the knight. Gerard convinced Razor to fly Goldmoon, Tasslehoff, and Conundrum to the Tower of High Sorcery in Nightlund, while (the knight/he) decided to return to the city.
  

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Best to use "the knight", if the reader understands your FYI. Otherwise, there are just too many people who could be the antecedent.

— Philip

  • Best to use "the knight", if the reader understands your FYI.
  • Otherwise, there are just too many people who could be the antecedent.
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Best to use "the knight", if the reader understands your FYI. Otherwise, there are just too many people who could be the antecedent.
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Thanks, is this revision a better option though? I added the sentence before it for context. That night, Goldmoon freed Gerard from imprisonment, and the pair left Solanthus along with Tasslehoff and the gnome Conundrum. Gerard convinced Razor to fly Goldmoon, Tasslehoff, and Conundrum to the Tower of High Sorcery in Nightlund, but decid
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