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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
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Hi,
Question:
1) Which sentence is more sensible?
2) Do my opinions correct?
Sentence1:
I have good team working skills which make your company operative more smoothly.
Sentence2:
I have good team working skills, which make your company operative more smoothly.
My opinion:
For sentence1:
"The skills that I have" are the skills that can make your company operate more smoothly.
For sentence2:
Since I have team working skills, I can make your company operate more smoothly.
Both sensible but sentence 2 seem better.
Thanks
Question:
1) Which sentence is more sensible?
2) Do my opinions correct?
Sentence1:
I have good team working skills which make your company operative more smoothly.
Sentence2:
I have good team working skills, which make your company operative more smoothly.
My opinion:
For sentence1:
"The skills that I have" are the skills that can make your company operate more smoothly.
For sentence2:
Since I have team working skills, I can make your company operate more smoothly.
Both sensible but sentence 2 seem better.
Thanks
Top answer
uktous Question: 1) Which sentence is more sensible? 2) Do my opinions correct? Sentence1: I have good team working skills which make your company operative more smoothly.
- uktous Question: 1) Which sentence is more sensible?
- 2) Do my opinions correct?
- Sentence1: I have good team working skills which make your company operative more smoothly.
- Sentence2: I have good team working skills , which make your company operative more smoothly.
- Hi I would go for number one because it says that you possess the working skills this company needs.
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uktousQuestion:
1) Which sentence is more sensible?
2) Do my opinions correct?
Sentence1:
I have good team working skills which make your company operative more smoothly.
Sentence2:
I have good team working skills, which make your company operative more smoothly.
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Hi,
Yes, you need the versions with 'can'.
However, I recommend simply 'I have good team working skills' or, more naturally, 'I can work well in a team'.
The words are your choice, of course, but to me it seems a little presumptuous of you to contimnue by telling the interviewer that you can improve his company. He may think that his company has done OK
Yes, you need the versions with 'can'.
However, I recommend simply 'I have good team working skills' or, more naturally, 'I can work well in a team'.
The words are your choice, of course, but to me it seems a little presumptuous of you to contimnue by telling the interviewer that you can improve his company. He may think that his company has done OK
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