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Alc24 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Which way to word 3 sentences naturally?

Could you please help me word these properly?

1 There is no point in doing that if you get hurt./if it's to get hurt.

2 There are so/too many germs in here that I can...

3 If you could get mad for more important thing/for things that were important rather than things that don't need your getting mad, it'd be nice.

Thank you
  

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1 There is no point in doing that if you're going to get hurt. 2 There are so many germs in here that I can... 3 It would be nice it you could muster some of that anger for something important.

— MalRey

  • 1 There is no point in doing that if you're going to get hurt.
  • 2 There are so many germs in here that I can...
  • 3 It would be nice it you could muster some of that anger for something important.
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1 There is no point in doing that if you're going to get hurt.

2 There are so many germs in here that I can...

3 It would be nice it you could muster some of that anger for something important.
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Clear, but "will" is also idiomatic in 1:

"There's no point in doing that if you'll get hurt"

And I think there's a typo in 3:

"It would be nice if..."

Cheers,

RENAN
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