Hi guys, the sentence underlined seems to be interpreted in two ways:
1) Students today are born into a world. The world is so fast-paced and technologically
advanced that the need for stimulation is merely a way of life.
2) Students today are born into a world that is so fast-paced and technologically advanced.
Therefore, their need for stimulation is merely a way of life.
Which way do you think is correct or better in this context? Any reason for that, if possible?
Any idea would be valued. Thanks for all of you for sharing your ideas~!
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Today’s teachers must know that students are changing. Students
today are born into a world that is so fast-paced and technologically
advanced that the need for stimulation is merely a way of life. A true
teacher is aware that nothing great has ever been accomplished without
focus, pondering, and problem solving. Therefore, the skilled teacher
embraces the new challenge of reshaping the brain to be able to focus.
anonymous Which way do you think is correct or better in this context? Neither is nearly as good as the original. anonymous Any reason for that, if possible?
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anonymousWhich way do you think is correct or better in this context?
Neither is nearly as good as the original.
anonymousAny reason for that, if possible?
Only the original is native composition, appropriately relating the several concepts through grammar structure.