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MUSCOVITE Posted 13 years ago
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...which was the goal.

Hi,

Finally, the requester’s status will change from OFF to ON, which was our goal.

(1) Is this sentence OK?
(2) I wonder if the following modifications are "passable" as well.

(a) "..., which was the goal"

(b) "..., which has been the/our goal"

(c) "..., which is the required/desired result"
(d) "..., which is the required/desired outcome"

There must be some other cliches?


Thank you!


mus-te
  

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Hi, Why not just say this? Finally, the requester’s status will change from OFF to ON. Clive

  • Hi, Why not just say this?
  • Finally, the requester’s status will change from OFF to ON.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Why not just say this? Finally, the requester’s status will change from OFF to ON.

Clive
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Hi Clive!

In fact, my question was NOT about the "core part" (Finally, the requester’s status will change from OFF to ON.)
I was hoping you could help me figure out which of the "tail expressions" (..., which was our goal., etc.) were correct grammar.

Sorry, I should have explained what I needed more clearly....

Mus-te
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Strictly as grammar, they are all correct.

Clive

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