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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Which version of this sentence is correct?

Read through at least twice, and, thereupon, until no additional mistakes are found.

or

Read through at least twice, and thereupon, until no additional mistakes are found.

Notice the commas near the "and".

If you think neither of these are correct, please tell me why.
  

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Hi, Read through at least twice , and , thereupon , until no additional mistakes are found. or Read through at least twice , and thereupon , until no additional mistakes are found. Notice the commas near the "and".

  • Hi, Read through at least twice , and , thereupon , until no additional mistakes are found.
  • or Read through at least twice , and thereupon , until no additional mistakes are found.
  • Notice the commas near the "and".
  • If you think neither of these are correct, please tell me why.
  • 'Thereupon' is a fairly uncommon word, and seems unneeded in this context.
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Hi,

Read through at least twice, and, thereupon, until no additional mistakes are found.

or

Read through at least twice, and thereupon, until no additional mistakes are found.

Notice the commas near the "and".

If you think neither of these are correct, please tell me why.

'Thereupon' is a fairly uncommon wo

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