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Onemorning85 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Which version of the sentence is correct?

Read through at least twice, and thereupon, until no additional mistakes are found.

or

Read through at least twice, and, thereupon, until no additional mistakes are found.

Notice the commas.

If you believe neither of these is correct, tell me why.
  

Top answer

Neither seems right to me. The word "thereupon" does not seem to make sense in this context.

  • Neither seems right to me.
  • The word "thereupon" does not seem to make sense in this context.
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Neither seems right to me. The word "thereupon" does not seem to make sense in this context.

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