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English 1b3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Which version is best?

a. Tumblr is popular among teens interested in self-expression and wanting an alternative to Facebook.

b. Tumblr is popular among teens who are interested in self-expression and who want an alternative to Facebook.

c. Tumblr is popular among teens interested in self-expression and who want an alternative to Facebook.

d. ?
  

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To me A sounds best but you can also try this alternative: Tumblr is a popular platform for self-expression among teens who want an alternative to Facebook. Hope that helps!

  • To me A sounds best but you can also try this alternative: Tumblr is a popular platform for self-expression among teens who want an alternative to Facebook.
  • Hope that helps!
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To me A sounds best but you can also try this alternative:

Tumblr is a popular platform for self-expression among teens who want an alternative to Facebook.

Hope that helps!
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I'm starting to wonder if the 'and' before 'wanting' should be removed from a...
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Hello Emotion: smile

Yes, you could do that too so the sentence would be:

Tumblr-- an alternative to Facebook-- is popular amon

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