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Waverhouse Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Which / that

I have this sentence:

The word “utopia” evokes the thought of a society in which mankind can create, and most importantly, maintain a standard of living which permits life in a balance of liberty, equality and a supply of resources that can provide for everybody.

But I want to get rid of the two "which" at the beginning. Would this be correct:

The word “utopia” evokes the thought of a society in which mankind can create, and most importantly, maintain a standard of living able to permit life in a balance of liberty, equality and a supply of resources that can provide for everybody.

  

Top answer

maintain a standard of living able to permit life in a balance of liberty, equality and a supply of resources that can provide for everybody. Yes; that's one possibility. Incidentally, this is the lexical modal use of the adjective "able", where it used for present ability.

  • maintain a standard of living able to permit life in a balance of liberty, equality and a supply of resources that can provide for everybody.
  • Yes; that's one possibility.
  • Incidentally, this is the lexical modal use of the adjective "able", where it used for present ability.
  • Another possibility is: ...
  • maintain a standard of living capable of permitting life in a balance of liberty, equality and a supply of resources that can provide for everybody.
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... maintain a standard of living able to permit life in a balance of liberty, equality and a supply of resources that can provide for everybody.

Yes; that's one possibility.

Incidentally, this is the lexical modal use of the adjective "able", where it used for present ability.

Another possibility is:

... maintain a standard of living capable

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