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Ellisa Posted 11 years ago
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Hi teachers!
I have wrote a sentence in three different version that contain same meaning (as I see them...) and I hope you could check which sounds better or suggest me another well-written one if none is good(T.T). Thanks in advance!
1. The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce high qualify work they used to.
2. The more years the elderly work, the less productive and poorer quality work would be resulted in.
3. The more the retirement age is extended, the less productive and poor quality work will be brought about.
I have wrote a sentence in three different version that contain same meaning (as I see them...) and I hope you could check which sounds better or suggest me another well-written one if none is good(T.T). Thanks in advance!
1. The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce high qualify work they used to.
2. The more years the elderly work, the less productive and poorer quality work would be resulted in.
3. The more the retirement age is extended, the less productive and poor quality work will be brought about.
Top answer
The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce the high qualify work that they used to. The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce as high a qualify of work that they used to. The more years the elderly work, the more their productivity decreases and the poorer the quality of their work becomes.
- The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce the high qualify work that they used to.
- The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce as high a qualify of work that they used to.
- The more years the elderly work, the more their productivity decreases and the poorer the quality of their work becomes.
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The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce the high qualify work that they used to.
The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce as high a qualify of work that they used to.
The more years the elderly work, the more their productivity decreases and the
The more years the elderly work, the less likely they are to be productive and produce as high a qualify of work that they used to.
The more years the elderly work, the more their productivity decreases and the
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