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Akavall Posted 18 years ago
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Which sounds better?

0 Which of those sentences sounds better?02br
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001) 00Major tournament triumphs were soon to follow, such as Dortmund 1995, Tilburg 1997, and Wijk aan Zee 1998.02br
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002) Major tournament triumphs such as Dortmund 1995, Tilburg 1997, and Wijk aan Zee 1998 were soon to follow.02br
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00I hope they are at both correct...02br
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00Thanks in advance.0-
  

Top answer

0I really prefer #1. In #2 the list takes all the impact and forward motion out of the sentence. 0-

— Avangi

  • 0I really prefer #1.
  • In #2 the list takes all the impact and forward motion out of the sentence.
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0I really prefer #1. In #2 the list takes all the impact and forward motion out of the sentence. I'm sure they're both okay.0-
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0 I think the first sounds better.02br
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0Thank you, guys.0-
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