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Findaway Posted 9 years ago
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Which sentence reads better

1. Actions that must be taken if concerns regarding the welfare of children arise.

2. Actions that must be taken if concerns arise regarding the welfare of children.

  

Top answer

Neither is a complete sentence. They both seem like titles. I prefer #1.

  • Neither is a complete sentence.
  • They both seem like titles.
  • I prefer #1.
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Neither is a complete sentence. They both seem like titles.

I prefer #1.

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